• Exploring a way of presenting one of the pages/text

Probably need a bit of a crop – although this has been scanned rather than photographed and I should try both. I also think I might need to reduce the percentage of the graph -and perhaps clone out the Chartwell branding? Although I’m not sure about that – branding is everywhere. Is this too much telling instead of showing? Or does it ground more securely within the entangled topics I’m exploring and give people a little more to hold on to?

• I have been playing with how I label things  – recall, I discussed providing method at the back of the book but have been exploring doing in on the page beneath the title. I think on reflection I won’t do either but here are some examples – my eldest son rightly pointed out it seemed like justification, and there was no need for such. Plus, this assignment is called Showing Not Telling  – so in the spirit of… screenshots (with ID guidelines here)