BOW A5: Response to BOW A4 tutor feedback and ongoing development

Ruth said in my feedback it would be good to have seen a record of the interactions between the Ai and me. So below are a selection of screenshots I kept as we went along. As I look through them, it is useful to be visiting again  – I may incorporate some of it into the pages of text I am thinking about including and there may well be some that should be included as statements alongside images.

In addition, yesterday I created a very rough dummy (black and white, fast printing) as requested by the printer, which prompted me to completely revisit the sequence and think about the containing structure. (See video here). I will probably dispense with the vertical thirds page – the horizontally short pages are sufficient. It was a very useful exercise and I have now ordered some double-sided paper to make a better dummy which I should be able to print elsewhere using a laser printer which will up the quality a great deal. Seeing the object solved lots of questions but triggered more.

Here are the screenshots of interactions plus some images we shared – shown to me and visa versa.

 

BOW A4: Tutor Feedback

I had a good chat with Ruth this morning – we mainly discussed how I could bring some sort of contextual written work in and what that might be.

I shared some early ideas and talked about the examples I’d seen recently  – both over the years and recently as I specifically look for various ways of doing this. The Lewis Bush course I’ve been doing this week on book/zine-making has been invaluable and he has shared many relevant examples, some of which I will link to on this blog in another post next week.

Here is the tutor report: Sarah-JaneField_TR_4 with my comments